I think it looks awesome, and I love the colour choice and expressions they have!
A lil tip:
Instead of just saying "i suck i'm so bad", you should start thinking more in terms of "i tried my best, but i could improve on . i will get better with practice!"
Nobody wants to hear "it loosk bad im so terrible! so dumb", and saying that doesn't help you out. This makes people think you're fishing for compliments. Looking for ways you could improve next time while still knowing that you tried your best is the way to go